ext_234344 ([identity profile] lilhellsangel.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ratherastory 2009-12-09 11:18 pm (UTC)

Actually I have to be in bed by now because school will be tomorrow again but your fic just caught me so I just had to read it til the end and just had to write a review to you! :D

Your fic is AWESOME, even though it is utterly heartbreaking. :(((
So, Dean was the one who said the big yes. :( Sacrifising his life.Again.

Love the way Sam is holding on to Dean.Just like that:
'We're brothers, you know, we're family. And, uh... No matter how bad it gets, that doesn't change.'

Your characterisation is really amazing.You descrive Sam's feelings so well and the lines are so spot on.:) And the small brotherly gestures.... ♥ Just love it! :)
It think my heart just arched when the first word which came out of Dean's mouth was Sam. Oh boys.

“Don't worry about it,” he says soothingly. “I won't let anything happen. I've got your back.”

Tentatively he reaches out, hesitates, smooths the hair from Dean's forehead.

Awwwww.

I so LOVE your writing style.♥ It's so utterly beautiful. And your end is so great. Oh, and I so like your headline for this fic.

Thank you so much for sharing your amazing work! :DDD <33 *saves to bookmarks*


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