I'm so happy to see more of this. It's easily my favorite thing you've done--good pacing, great characterization, realistic interactions and a compelling premise.

I'm also absolutely thrilled to death about what I consider your avoidance of a major failure featured in a lot of amnesia-based stories: the situation where somehow a character retains memories of every aspect necessary for functioning, such as language, operating a toaster, putting on clothes, etc...but somehow forgets the equally essential supernatural or demon- or alien- or whatever-related things. Despite those things being as integral a part of their self as the toaster-clothes-speaking stuff--if that makes sense. I did a little metaphorical dance of glee when you dealt with this issue in this way, and I'm glad to see it continued.

Enjoying Brady's characterization. So good at being bad...