I totally understand about never having enough time when beta-ing something to point out all the things we like. :)
I can't tell you what a relief it is to hear that all the changes I made worked. Funnily enough, while I complained a lot about having to get rid of my Deathless Prose™, the decision to get rid of the bits you suggested wasn't nearly as hard as I thought it would be. It really was a very good suggestion and I knew it from the start.
Once I realized just how tangled up I got that first sex scene I spent a good five minutes giggling before I was able to actually get around to fixing it. :D
Thank you so much for your awesome beta job. The story is so much better thanks to you.
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I totally understand about never having enough time when beta-ing something to point out all the things we like. :)
I can't tell you what a relief it is to hear that all the changes I made worked. Funnily enough, while I complained a lot about having to get rid of my Deathless Prose™, the decision to get rid of the bits you suggested wasn't nearly as hard as I thought it would be. It really was a very good suggestion and I knew it from the start.
Once I realized just how tangled up I got that first sex scene I spent a good five minutes giggling before I was able to actually get around to fixing it. :D
Thank you so much for your awesome beta job. The story is so much better thanks to you.
*smishes you and twirls you*