http://blubird-pie.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] blubird-pie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ratherastory 2010-03-19 01:24 am (UTC)

Hehe, add me to the list of people who weren't that impressed with show-Lindsay, but loved her here. It's awesome how she talks to Sam as a peer re:addiction, which is something I think he needs more of, and how tender she was with the soup and coaxing info about Dean out of him. On a different note, I love how you describe Sam packing up and leaving so quickly and absolutely, something that seems like a real hallmark of Winchesterhood to me.

Oh, and a last point– you shouldn't worry about writing sex poorly this was *eh hem* more than fine.

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