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ratherastory ([personal profile] ratherastory) wrote2010-09-24 02:38 pm

Only Found Another Orphan

Title: Found Only Another Orphan
Summary: Fusion 'verse. Sam and Dean have an unexpected encounter one day at the bookstore.
Characters: Sam, Dean, OCs
Rating: PG-13
Wordcount: 2,782
Disclaimer: Still not mine.
Warnings: Swearing, nothing else.
Neurotic Author's Note #1: The Fusion 'verse is eating my brain. I have no explanation.
Neurotic Author's Note #2: Written fast with no revision, because I was trying for a puppy and failed. ;) Instead it turned into an outsider POV of Sam having a good day, at least to start with. There is still no puppy. Mea culpa.
Neurotic Author's Note #3: Title is taken from 'Moby Dick.'




There are advantages to small-town living. Sophie Wilder made her choice consciously, because she wanted to live in a place where everyone would know who she was, and where she could keep her door unlocked without living in constant fear of burglary or home invasions. Real estate was reasonable, and by owning the only decent bookstore in town, she guaranteed herself a modest income that more than paid for everything she needed and wanted, with enough wriggle room for the occasional splurge. Of course, that doesn't mean there aren't disadvantages, too. For one thing, there is no such thing as keeping your personal life personal: everyone knows everything there is to know about you, and what they don't know they'll happily speculate on until they've come up with something that suits their fancy. For another, there aren't that many well-read people in small rural communities. It's cliché, but there you have it.

Having someone with whom to argue loudly about 'Moby Dick' over coffee, then, is an unheard-of luxury. So what if Sam Winchester isn't all there? she tells herself. No one else in town seems to mind: he's something of a gentle giant, even on his bad days. On his good days, she can see the Stanford law-school dropout, mind as razor-sharp as ever. If she lets herself think about it too long, her eyes sting and her throat closes up.

“No, really, I get the whole whale-as-metaphor thing,” he's saying now, leaning over the counter by the cash register as his brother sets up the latest display of best-sellers by the window. “Everybody does, right? It's a cliché for a reason. I just think it's not enough to carry the whole book. I spent four hundred and fifty pages waiting for them to get to the damned whale, and then I got a page and a half of the whale kicking their asses. Come on!” his smile lights up his face, and she can't help but laugh.

“It's a classic!” she protests. “It's not meant to be about the whale. It's about the journey. The whale is practically superfluous.”

“You're telling me I should count myself lucky I got to read about the whale at all? No thanks,” he scoffs. “Bad enough I had to wade through all those chapters about whaling and the even more painful stuff on the whales themselves. And don't get me started on the whole Jonah thing. I've had enough Biblical metaphor to last me several lifetimes.”

“Careful,” she wags a finger, “you're treading close to blasphemy, there.”

He rolls his eyes. “Yeah, I'm not really worried about that. What I'd like to know is what Melville's sources were for his information about whales.”

“Oh, and you're an expert on cetaceans all of a sudden?”

“I did a presentation on them for class in fifth grade,” he grins, and she lets out a delighted cackle.

“Oh, well, then! That settles it, I suppose.”

“Absolutely.”

“What about Ahab?”

“Yeah, 'cause what I really wanted to read about was an obsessed bastard chasing something that ultimately destroys him,” there's a wry twist to his mouth that she can't interpret. “I just wanted to see the whale,” he taps the counter with his index finger for emphasis.

Dean limps over to them, his cane dangling from one hand. He doesn't use it much, but tends to keep it with him just in case. She's not sure why she hired him to begin with, when he came limping into her store and essentially told her that he could work as long as it didn't involve bending his right knee, ever. She'd never heard of fusing a knee joint before meeting him, but apparently replacing a knee wasn't a good idea for someone his age. Something else she'd never heard of. Now that she has hired him, though, she's decided it's probably the best decision she ever made. Besides being a quick study and a hard worker, he's a hell of a draw to the bookstore. The local girls are fascinated with the handsome stranger with the tragic past, the local gossips equally so, and the first few weeks he was here her sales doubled. They're not as impressive anymore, but the increase in percentages is still noticeable. The guy could sell a television to a blind man, if he put his mind to it.

“You guys are giving me a headache, so I'm going to resolve this for you. Patrick Stewart is awesome, therefore 'Moby Dick' gets to keep on existing in the classics.”

Sam shakes his head. “Oh my God. Vetoed by Captain Picard. Well, I supposed there are worse ways to go.” He glances at the clock. “I guess I should be going, let you guys finish opening up. This isn't over, though,” he says meaningfully. “We're definitely going to be discussing this further.”

“You betcha,” Sophie smiles at him. “You can stick around, see if there are any other classics you want to rip apart that catch your eye.”

He hesitates, and suddenly the easy, relaxed look is gone from his face, as though someone just snuffed out a candle. He clasps his left wrist in his right hand, rubs his thumb over the back of his hand, eyes tracking something she can't see. “Oh, um... y-yeah, okay. Sure. Dean?”

Dean has spotted the change too, but he doesn't blink. They're all accustomed to it by now, or at least as accustomed as they can get. He gives Sam a thump on the arm. “You go ahead, Sammy. I'm going to open up, now, but you come find me if there's anything, okay?”

Sam just nods, gives Sophie a wan smile that's so far removed from the brilliant grin from before that she almost bursts into tears. “I'll, uh... just go to the back, then. Check out the...” he doesn't finish his sentence, wanders off amidst the stacks.

“He's okay,” Dean says quietly. “You don't have to worry. He won't cause problems.”

She sighs, counts out the float for the cash register. “That's not what I'm worried about. He's a good kid.”

Dean snorts. “He's twenty-nine. I'm still trying to get used to the fact that I don't have to hold his hand to cross the street. Most days, anyway,” he amends.

He glances after Sam, then visibly shakes himself, and heads off to reshelve the books in the mystery section that always seem to end up in a big jumble. She thinks that's probably Judy Blackwell's doing: the elderly woman's an avid fan of Agatha Christie, and comes in every week or so to rummage through the shelves in the sweet but deluded hope that there will be a new Hercule Poirot novel available. It doesn't matter how many times Sophie tells her that Agatha Christie is dead, Judy will have forgotten about it a day later. She's pretty sure Sam won't remember their conversation about 'Moby Dick,' or else only bits and pieces of it.

It's a surprisingly busy morning, although Saturdays are always her busiest day of the week. She loses track of Sam in the stacks, spends a couple of hours helping out various customers. It's a source of pride that she has the best-stocked bookstore in the county, but it also means that the store tends to fill up on weekends. Dean is in his element, leaning on his cane and going on about romance novels, of all things, to three teenaged girls who are all blushing and giggling under his attentions.

“No, I get it,” he says with a wink. “Who doesn't like a little mystery in their romance? But seriously, it's not worth it. Follow me, and I'll show you to some books with a little more meat to them. No,” he holds up a hand when one of them starts to murmur a protest. “I don't want to hear it. You don't get a choice. I'll show you the books my brother read when he was your age, and since he's a gigantic girl, I'm sure you'll love 'em.”

There's a chorus of giggles, and Sophie rolls her eyes and goes back to work. Dean's a charmer, no mistaking it, but those girls are in for a world of disappointment if they think they stand a chance with him. For one, he's never struck her as the type to go for underage girls. For another thing, she's reasonably sure that it's only the fact that he's good-looking and has a mysterious-yet-tragic past that keeps them coming back. He's a romantic figure, Dean, with his stiff leg and his single-minded devotion to his war-scarred brother. She's sort of amazed the town girls don't trail after him more, come to think of it.

The front door chimes, and she pauses when she glances up and catches sight of two young men sauntering into her shop. They don't belong here, she can tell right away. Definitely not locals, and she's sure they're not here to shop for books. They're young, both white, in their early twenties at the latest, dressed in scruffy jeans and denim jackets over threadbare t-shirts, a couple of days' worth of stubble on their faces. There's an aura of secrecy and danger about them: they move like predators, careful and graceful and on edge, taking in her shop at a glance, noting exits and pathways. They remind her of Dean, she realizes with something akin to shock, and of Sam on his good days. Alert and watchful, although they have none of Dean's easy confidence or Sam's quiet competence. They spot what they're looking for a moment later, head purposefully into the stacks.

She drifts casually in the same direction, sees them make their way to the back of the store and make a beeline for Sam, who apparently found a book he liked. She can see the moment he senses their approach, the tension in his body language ratcheting up several notches. He puts the book back on its shelf and pivots to face them, sliding along the bookcase in an effort to make sure they can't flank him.

“Hey!” the older of the two approaches, then says something else she can't quite make out.

Sam backs up a step, shakes his head, and Sophie tries to move closer, to hear what they're saying. She doesn't like the look of them, although she's not sure why. The older one is talking again by the time she's within earshot.

“Look, we just need a few minutes of your time. Bobby Singer said you and your brother were the best, and we could use the help.”

Sophie turns, finds the nearest person, a skinny kid by the name of Billy Flynn who tends to hang out in here to get away from bullies, and grabs him by the arm. “Would you do me a favour and ask Dean to come over, right now?” Billy nods and scurries off.

Sam has backed up again, jerking his head back like a skittish horse. “I don't...” he glances around, rubbing the back of his left hand with his thumb. “You shouldn't be here.”

“We'll be out of your hair in a minute,” the same guy keeps talking. “It's just that this hunt is big, and you're the demon experts, you know? Even Bobby says so.”

It's crazy, but Sam flinches. “Don't... I can't... there are civilians here,” he says sharply, but she can see his Adam's apple bob as he swallows, and that sweat has broken out on his skin.

“Then let's go somewhere we can talk.”

“Hey!” the voice is Dean's, cutting through the conversation like a knife. He's leaning on his cane as he comes down the aisle, but for a split-second she finds herself genuinely afraid of him. He bears down on the two men, who mirror her reaction, stepping away from him. “Just what the fuck do you think you're doing?” he snarls, all the more frightening by keeping his voice low.

“Hey, man,” the older of the pair raises his hands in a placating gesture. “Chill. We didn't mean... look, we just need your help with something.”

“You're the best there ever was,” the younger one pipes up for the first time. She's amazed they haven't noticed her yet, although she's sure Dean knows she's there. The younger one is looking at Sam as though he's the second coming. “I mean, what you did. I mean, fucking Lucifer himself... what was it like?”

His friend swats him, but it's too late. Sam's face gets that shuttered expression she's all too familiar with, and he all but folds in on himself, shakes his head. “No,” he says quietly. “Not that. I can't... Dean?”

Dean's already got the kid by his collar, cane clattering to the floor. “Okay, douchenozzle. Rule number one if you want our help, no fucking questions about that. Rule number two, no fucking around with Sam. You got me?”

“Woah, easy,” the older one doesn't make a move, coiled on himself like a spring. “He's sorry, okay? Donnie, apologize to the man already..”

“'m sorry,” the apology comes out strangled.

Dean drops him, brushes himself off like he got dirt on his clothes just by touching the kid. “Right. Where are you two staying?”

“Motel just outside of town. Room six. I'm Eli, and the idiot with poor control over his mouth here is Donnie.”

“Okay, Eli,” Dean is visibly trying to keep a leash on his temper. “Give me your number. You want help? It's on my terms. Go back to your room, and I will call you. We'll talk, but later, when I'm not busy. I find out you've so much as breathed in Sam's direction, all bets are off. Clear?”

“Crystal. Let's go, Donnie,” Eli tugs on his partner's elbow, all but drags him away.

When he's sure they're gone, Dean blows out a long breath, then reaches out and puts a hand on Sam's arm. “Y'okay, Sammy?”

Sam shakes his head. “I dunno. I was... I dunno,” he keeps worrying at his wrist with his thumb, shoulders hunched. “I should... they need help, right? Bobby sent them. I remember. It's important, and I just, I'm not—”

“Hey,” Dean breaks through the quiet babble. “Hey, Sammy, it's okay. I got this, all right? Whatever this is, I can guarantee Bobby didn't send them, he would have called. They're just idiots. Come on, I need you to take a breath for me, okay? Just breathe, nice and even.” He looks directly at Sophie for the first time. “Uh, Soph? I know this is a shitty thing to ask on a Saturday, but can I get maybe an hour, just to get Sam home?”

Sam looks as though he's about to pass out right where he is, and even if there were five times the customers, she still wouldn't say no. She bends down, picks up Dean's cane and hands it to him. “Of course. I can handle things here for a while. Who were those guys?”

Dean nods, accepts the cane, and puts his arm around Sam's waist. “Uh, it's sort of a long story. Mostly it's to do with our Dad's old business. Haven't thought about it in a while, but I guess these two tracked us down. They don't... no one knows about Sam, except for folks here and our uncle Bobby. I think maybe I overreacted a bit, but...” he shrugs.

“No, I get it. They upset him,” she winces, hating that she's talking about Sam as though he's not even there, but in a way he's not. He's not completely checked-out, but she can tell he's on the edge, wavering, his fingers digging into Dean's arm, trying to anchor himself. “You go on, and take your time.”

To her surprise, Sam looks up and meets her gaze, lips quirking into a small smile. “It's not as crazy as it all sounds,” he says softly.

Dean nudges him. “Okay, I think we're done here. Come on, Sammy. Let's go home.”

Sam acquiesces, but as Dean ushers him through the door he glances back at her over his shoulder at her and smiles again apologetically. Whatever just happened, she's quite sure that she's never going to get the full story.

[identity profile] klutzy-girl.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 06:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Seriously, this is an awesome 'verse. Please keep writing in it!

Poor Sam. He was having a somewhat good day there! Stupid hunters.

I can't wait for more!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 06:54 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams*

Thank you!

The 'verse is eating my brain. I kind of love it. :)

[identity profile] de-nugis.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Sheesh, woman, that's one elusive puppy. It had better turn out to be a greyhound, the way it keeps outrunning you.

At least the idiot hunters weren't there to kill Sam. You had me worried for a minute. I love getting a glimpse of scary protective Dean; even in a quiet, healing 'verse I want to see Dean being a badass from time to time

More, more, more. With a freakin' puppy. : )

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 06:59 pm (UTC)(link)
The puppy is totally becoming a Thing™. The more I try to write it in, the less it wants to come. ;)

I didn't want to have the hunters coming for Sam. He's paid enough, I think.

And I really like scary!protective!Dean. No one fucks with his Sammy. :D

[identity profile] saschi212.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 07:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I saw the notification in my inbox and I was like, Please be Fusion 'verse, please be Fusion 'verse... And I was not disappointed :) I loved seeing that Sam can still be himself sometimes, discussing Moby Dick all happily. This 'verse makes me so happy! Thank you for sharing!!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 12:46 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, that's a heck of a compliment! Thank you! (You have notifications turned on? That's flattering and terrifying at the same time!)

I am a little in love with this 'verse myself. Bizarrely, it's turning into my happy place. :)
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[personal profile] sistabro 2010-09-24 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
*pets Sam*

I love that you gave him a tic. :) And protective!Dean ftw. But most of all, I love your outsider POVs, they are so fully realized, it's nice :)

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 12:48 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Sam. The whole hand-wringing tic (not quite hand-wringing, but close enough) is something of a self-soothing mechanism, I guess. Just something he does when things get overwhelming. I'm not sure why, but it was one of the strongest visuals I had of him when I first started writing in this 'verse.

Anyway, I'm glad you liked it! Working with outsider POVs is tricky, but really rewarding when they work out. :)
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[personal profile] bellatemple 2010-09-24 07:59 pm (UTC)(link)
This whole series is adorable -- and you write way too fast for me to comment on them all!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 12:49 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, thanks! I had to stop while I was away climbing a mountain, but especially now that I've seen 6.01 I think I may live in this 'verse for a while.

[identity profile] calamitycrow.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 08:03 pm (UTC)(link)
WOOT! more fusion verse! (does happy dance)

Dean selling romance books? Sam talking lit? good stuff. this kitty will, very magnanimously even, forgive the lack of the puppy.

this time.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 12:50 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, kitty! There will eventually be a puppy. Or, more likely at this point, a service dog for Dean to spoil rotten. ;)

[identity profile] jesseofthenorth.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 08:06 pm (UTC)(link)
"I spent four hundred and fifty pages waiting for them to get to the damned whale, and then I got a page and a half of the whale kicking their asses." Is just so Sam! [and I totally agree: the whale was pretty anti-climatic ;)] I love that your Sam is still essentially himself just screwed up. And your Dean! Insisting on Patrick Stewart validating a piece of classic literature. Love that his bad-ass is still totally intact!
Plus
Here puppy, puppy! * runs away!*
Edited 2010-09-24 20:09 (UTC)

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Sam and I share the same opinion about Moby Dick. ;)

Dean is totally still a badass.

I SWEAR there will be a puppy eventually!

[identity profile] fuzzytale.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
I love this 'verse so much, hope it keeps eating your brain!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you!

I'm sure I have a couple more fics left in me for this 'verse, have no fear. :)
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[identity profile] lavinialavender.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 09:15 pm (UTC)(link)
YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

This is exactly what I wanted to see when this verse first started - except these guys are idiots, ha. Omg, poor Sammy, who still wants to help despite his trauma. Love Dean's reaction. (I wonder if he has a weapon hidden in t3hat cane - seems like something he would insist on if he had to use a cane.)

Thank you again for being so prolific and posting these so soon before S6. It's helping me keep it together, and I'm sure it'll help me afterward too.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 01:07 am (UTC)(link)
Ah, young hunters. Wet behind the ears and st00pid. They mean well, but, like you said, they're idiots.

And of course Sam wants to help. It's Sam. :)

I don't know about the weapon in the cane, but I suspect he's probably got it reinforced with steel or something...

[identity profile] primrose-1.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Sam as you take him from bright to dark all in a few paragraphs. I wondered what would happen when their old life came back to haunt them. I wonder what the news will be when it gets all over town?

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 01:29 am (UTC)(link)
Poor Sam. It doesn't take much to wreck his good days. :(

I'm not sure if this is going to turn into a longer story or not yet, but I think it might...

[identity profile] harrigan.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
*adores*

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 02:46 am (UTC)(link)
♥♥♥

[identity profile] borgmama1of5.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 10:17 pm (UTC)(link)
For all that I don't care for 'permantantly disabled' stories, you write this with such fabulous characterizations that I have to read it anyway!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Aww, thank you! That means a lot.

I waver back and forth on the permanent injury topic, although I mostly like it.

It's just that I can't see Sam and Dean settling down permanently otherwise, unfortunately. :)

[identity profile] mimblexwimble.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 10:27 pm (UTC)(link)
This 'verse usually involves the reactions "oh Sam!" and "go Dean!". Which is a very good thing indeed.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 09:42 am (UTC)(link)
It is a good thing, isn't it? :)

I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

[identity profile] yasminke.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 11:07 pm (UTC)(link)
And part two to this is where?

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 09:43 am (UTC)(link)
In the works. I haven't decided if this is a one-off or the beginning of a casefic yet. :)

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[identity profile] greeneyes-fan.livejournal.com 2010-09-24 11:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Meanies! Leave poor Sammy alone!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 09:44 am (UTC)(link)
They're just idiots. Young and wet behind the ears. ;)

Poor Sam. It doesn't take much to ruin his good days...

[identity profile] roque-clasique.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 12:58 am (UTC)(link)
Hey, see that sofa? And the water-stained coffee table? And that red pillow?

Yeah, I LIVE IN THIS 'VERSE.

[identity profile] roque-clasique.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 01:04 am (UTC)(link)
ps THIS IS THE START OF A CASE OMG be mine?

[identity profile] mdlaw.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 02:31 am (UTC)(link)
Bad hunters upsetting Sammy...bad. m :I

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 09:58 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, poor Sam is having a rough time of it. :(

[identity profile] phyllis2779.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
Wow, this is intense, especially the second half. The fic just pulls you in.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 10:02 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks! I'm glad it worked for you. :)

[identity profile] phorenice.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 07:26 am (UTC)(link)
Jesus, woman, when do you sleep? (Not that I'm complaining...)
I love Sam arguing about "Moby Dick" (figures Ahab would remind him of a certain someone). In fact that conversation would fit perfectly into a Stanford-era fic - maybe minus the annoyance at Biblical metaphors.

Whatever just happened, she's quite sure that she's never going to get the full story.
Oh Sophie, you better hope so.
Stupid hunters, upsetting our Sammy...

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
I sleep occasionally. ;)

And yeah, I think the comparison between John and Ahab is an apt one.

Poor hunters. They're just well-meaning idiots. Young and green and still wet behind the ears.

[identity profile] chaigrl2786.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
SOOOOO AMAZING!!! Please just keep on writing!!! LOL.

Until next time, take care and Happy Writing!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 11:16 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! I definitely plan to keep on writing. :)

[identity profile] triquetralmoon.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Please continue writing in this 'verse. Love it, just came upon both of them today. I love that they've settled into this life and how very okay Dean is with that.

I hope Dean talks those girls out of reading "Twilight."

Poor Sam, starting off having a good day and then having it all ruined so quickly.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 11:18 am (UTC)(link)
*whips out her brofist icon*

There are actually four fics in this 'verse. I should create a master post, it seems. I'm so pleased you're enjoying it! It's quickly becoming my happy place. ;)

I'm sure Dean will move those girls over to some much better books. And yeah, poor Sam. Those hunters meant well, but they're kind of idiots.

[identity profile] sternuispider.livejournal.com 2010-09-25 09:03 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your Sam... so much. He just breaks my heart, being all Sam-like and broken. And Dean- I just love it when his protective side flares. And another OPOV? You're spoilin' me, haha.

Oh, and by the way, I saw the premiere yesterday (of course) and I thought I'd let you know that the whole time I kept thinking, 'But... but... the Fusion Verse is so much better! Why aren't they doing THAT?!' So... yeah, you really need to own Supernatural.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 11:20 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I really love Sam too. It was important to me to keep him as Sam as possible, just for purposes of contrast if nothing else. He's never not Sam, but sometimes reality just kind of slips through his fingers.

I enjoyed the premiere. I am really really worried about my boys, but I'm excited to see where it goes.
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[identity profile] morganoconner.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 03:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Since you went to the effort of putting up a nice pretty master post for this 'verse, I decided it was a good excuse to re-read the whole thing again. ^_^ And I know I'm a terrible person when it comes to leaving comments, but seriously, this whole 'verse is honestly one of my favorite things in the world of fanfiction. Every time a new part pops up on my flist, I go a little nuts and start flailing around happily. So you're, y'know, awesome, and I really, really can't wait for more!

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 03:35 pm (UTC)(link)
LOL

That is SO nice to hear, I can't even tell you! And I understand, I'm not great at the commenting thing myself. I try to be, but I don't always manage it. :)

[identity profile] little-tristan.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 04:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Is it wrong that these fics keep making me cry? I love Sophie getting a glimpse of the truth, especially since she won't spread it around, and Dean going into big brother mode in a big way. But the icing? Sam might have sounded kind of dazed at the end, but I don't think he was. For just a second, he had it all together again. And that's what breaks my heart.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 04:42 pm (UTC)(link)
No, no! It's very flattering that they make you cry! (Only in the world of creative writing is "you made me cry" a compliment)

Poor Sam. He does mostly have himself together in this story. I can't begin to think what that encounter would have been like if he'd been having a bad day. :P
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[personal profile] embroiderama 2010-09-27 04:37 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm SO GLAD you posted a master post for this because I totally lost track of what this 'verse was and, you know, the fact that I liked the first one so much. So I just read them back from the beginning and wow, I love this 'verse like crazy. I love the way Dean and Sam take care of each other in their own ways with the people of the town there to support them. Even though they're both so dmanaged, I think this is such a positive future for them. LOVE.

[identity profile] ratherastory.livejournal.com 2010-09-27 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
*beams*

Oh, good. I'm glad it served a useful purpose, then. I thought it might be getting lost in the shuffle, since I've been churning out a decent number of short-ish fics lately. :)

I am a little bit in love with this 'verse, and I think it shows. Yeah, I broke the boys, but they're also settled and happy.

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